online chat,
e-mail subjects.
three, almost insignificant dots.
silence.
nothing, yet something at the same time.
...
it's the written form of us.
A contest entry
- . by individuality.
380 points, ended April 3, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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'it's the written form of us' - amazing!
I like how short yet beautifully spoken this piece is and the title - simple and appropriate.
Galing kabayan
You grow as each time I read your new poems.
Thanks for sharing and keep writing.
HENSLEY
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I really like the simple complexity of this piece. It flows well and is easily relatable. A very smooth and delightful read to be sure. Thank you for sharing this with me and best wishes to you in all of your endeavors. Keep that quill dipped in ink and ever ready for use dear poet.
♥ Touchof1der -
a good piece of poetry that you have written, ellipses are a pet peeve of mine as no one hardly knows how to use them properly! good luck in my contest. why did you remove then re-enter!
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