Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read Contests Groups Learn Forums Store Help
 

.:Tesselations, speculations:.

Tesselations
Speculations

Fitting into life.
One divide,
juggling, jumbling,
matching stride.

Thursday, Friday,
pass the gate:
some more numbers
for the slate.

Stop-

smelling flowers,
rush through,
gotta be on time, (gotta be on time!)
What to do?

Men watch through telescopes

Eyeing sin,
and the delicious kin.
Beyond superlunary,
black, dark, cold-
SUPER SCARY

Tesselations
only speculations-

carved in life,
to the sky-

Fly so high.


'Final'

Tesselation,
specualtion,
preparation-

For future domination.

Author notes

Just a bit of an odd poem on my part, it's supposed to invoking thoughts and make you wonder what exactly it's about. Did I succeed?

Cackle and laugh, Cackle and laugh, what did you feel on your behalf?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments


  • Aesthete2000 gold member
    April 3, 2008

    Edit | Reply
    Repetition
    intuition

    shape ajoining shape
    ad infinitum
    to sky above
    depths of earth
    scary reaches

    repetition
    intuition

    studiers unite
    prepare to dominate

    the revenge of young minds who know
    more than others think they do

    Hope, I thought I was piecing the meaning
    together, the hectic rush, close-up observation,
    then to domination. But in my mind I see
    the Escher tessellations masking taped to my wall,
    (I had taken an Escher book apart!)
    flying geese morphed to fish.

    But lost in the mystery of your words
    as to how the pieces can fit together
    so well???

    Indeed, an excellent thought provoker!

    (Perhaps I need footnotes at the bottom of the page!)

    Aesthete