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Aroma

A gentle breeze
bathes my future slumber
with intoxicating aroma.

Author notes

The original contest prompt was 'White Sheets' 10 word only. My first thought was of white sheets billowing on a clothesline, reminding me of my youth.

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  • Uglyblackdog
    April 6, 2008
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    excellent

    very nice short poetry..very well written


  • paulcreates silver member
    April 5, 2008
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    Ah! This one allows me to drift and imagine...yes.
    Thank you for entering.
    Paul


  • tara wilson gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    this is very beautiful..I love the smell of fresh, summer dried sheets, too...lovely, congrats on the bronze...


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    April 2, 2008

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    Such beautiful wording of memories and life's simple pleasures... x Many blessings, love and light, Lavender Butterfly.... x