Your eyes, your touch, your kiss
Waited my whole life for this
So many things I wanted to do
In that short time I had with you
The wind was blowing cold and brisk
I was so scared but needed to take the risk
I got off the bus and saw you walking towards me
Then I realized, this was no longer a fantasy
You opened your arms as I ran to you
This was finally my dream come true
The snow was falling all around us
As we kissed passionately in front of the bus
We lost our control on the two hour ride
For our excitement we could not hide
Your fingers explored as you watched the road
Biting your bottom lip as I moaned
We arrived and were soon lost in love
Bodies gliding in the moonlight from above
Looking into your eyes tasting kisses so sweet
Thrusting in and out never missing a beat
With one last thrust you let out a hum
Souls connecting as we both cum
We collapse in each other's arms falling asleep
A memory like this I will always keep
The biggest mission in my life
Is to forever be your wife
Baby I'm yours and you're mine
And we'll be making memories 'till the end of time!
Author notes
option 4 (lost-rose-petal) thanks for the permission!
A contest entry
- for Romantic Dreamers ~~ OPEN TO ALL! by PassionsPromise.
1800 points, ended April 19, 2008, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any advice?
Comments
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beautifully done and i loved the flow and story is powerfull
great write
Kas K Bubbles
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Wow~~
Now this is one HOT piece penned and I was making my way back to the entries I missed in the contest~
Love this!!
Wooooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Magnificent tale told!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-Throws confetti-
Woooooooooo Hoooooooooooo
Thank You for sharing Your Heart and Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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the first kiss sets the tone in life as well as this delightful romp. Best wishes, forevermore
Joe
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Such a beautiful write for this
contest my dear friend! I love all
of the passion and imagery in here.
Well done and I hope that you do well
with it in this contest! Always a
pleasure to read you!
Jeremy0826
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Another great work of art! True love from beginning to end! The kind of love often only dreamt of, and seen in the movies. Dreams and movies don't create themselves, these come from the feelings of those who have true love encased in their hearts! And that's you my friend! This poem is beautiful, sexy, and wonderfully written all in one!
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Oh my this is simply beautiful. I lovd this. Thanks for your entry and wish you the best. Thanks for following the rules and having info in author notes.
Welcome to finalists.
Passions
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wow!! thanks sooooo much!! A true story seems to be much more influencing!
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Two souls can meet and love so true
In erotic verse like this
It seems that you know what to do
When you get a steamy kiss!
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I like the soft gentleness in the description of love and passion connecting between two souls, it's not what I was expecting when reading the first stanza, even though the erotic content rises the further the piece goes on, it's almost like it becomes more gentle with it.
Good write.
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He is one lucky guy
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Wonderful
Awww, this is so romantic and well done. You touch the heart with this one. Thank you for sharing.
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Thank YOU for taking the time to read!!!
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Lovely erotic....truly is the best thing in the world, having someone to share these moments with..
Rob..
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Thanks so much for the comment!!
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