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(Contest) Your Breath

This can't be real,
me and you.
I don't deserve someone so beautiful.

Tremble at the touch,
warm breath on my neck.
Bringing me back to your arms, your caress.

A contest entry

Yeah... comment lol

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  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    April 4, 2008
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    Wow

    Heck it's short but still very very beautiful!! well done!!!


  • joelegy
    April 3, 2008
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    I like this!
    a lot!
    its great!!!