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(Contest) Crimson Angel

A fragile mind collapses upon itself
As morbid wings of the crimson angel protrude,
their silver glow shattering the darkness of lies.
Eclipsing the hope of the damned

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word bank one
mind, collapse, morbid, angel, silver, shattering, eclipsing

A contest entry

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  • Rianna Bear
    April 10, 2008

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    this, although short, was very powerful. you placed all your selected words carefully and with (dark) grace. thanks so much for sharing and for your entry!

    *R


  • danceswsquirrels
    April 2, 2008

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    Ohh.. very powerful

    corrections
    colapses= collapses.... that's it..


    good job!


    Jessa♥


  • crimsondew
    April 2, 2008
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    A compact poem well on the bank and expressing just as much..All the best!