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Like Songs In the Wind



we danced with ribbons
of red and long tails
on a sturdy framework,
hands grasped the string
of our appeasing bauble

fingers grasped firmly
upon the twine of tugs
and weaves, time came
like dissipated winds,
whisked are we in arms
to another place and time

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  • tara wilson gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    very beautiful & serene mood.....your name absolutely matches your poem here....