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Hail

The little wind that there is
Plays with my mind
My soul

Soft drumming of the hail
Pounding down the earth
Cooling my flesh
My Heart

Hands out to catch one
A little piece of the sky
Closest I'll ever come,
To Heaven

With fingers i am touched
The fingers
Of natures spirit
Stealing the warmth of my soul

Salt upon my face
Amalgamates with
The shards of Heaven
No hope for this to pass

No Hope.
Just perhaps, a new understanding
A grain of wisdom
From natures peaceful brutality

Author notes

I was planning on writing a poem about hail since a delightful experience I had a few days ago. But i cant say I really like this poem, but here it is anyway...

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  • myana15
    April 4, 2008
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    i like it


  • xox-emma-xox
    April 3, 2008

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    The title doesn't really fit the poem and there is a lower case I somewhere in here. Nice try though1 better luck next time!
    Emma ^_^