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He Wiped Your Scars Away

Once upon a time, I was a happy little girl
And the way I lived was seeing joy in all the world
Then one day I realized that there were bad things too
It happened long ago and it happened because of you

You took me by the hand and you told me I was pretty
I should never have trusted you when you gave me no pity
You used me as your plaything for your own twisted desires
The way I see the world now is just a sphere hosting liars

I used to never cry at night and fall asleep in tears
I didn't flinch at all mens' voices because of old fears
You took the smiles that I gave to everyone I trusted
Replacing them with twisted sneers- my face feels like it's rusted.

I look into my mirror now and see the woman's pain
I'm only seventeen, but I'll never be a child again
You might have ruined me forever if God had not intervened
And sent me an angel to polish my tarnished heart to a bright sheen

Beyond the pain I see a strength I've never seen before
You made me into someone that I hated and abhorred
Now that scarred and broken girl is resting peacefully
She has been healed and repaired and transformed into me

My guardian angel protects me now from memories of fear
He stands watch over all my dreams, his strength is always here
His influence over my outlook gives my healed heart wings
My Battlefield Justice giver has made me a new thing.

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Dedicated to my Guardian Wolf, Justin
Love, Your Rose @};-

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  • Chanson belle
    May 10, 2008
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    very emotional and pretty
    thank you for entering =]


  • lustfulviolets
    April 14, 2008
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    good write


  • fairytalelovestory
    April 8, 2008

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    i cant express how much this spoke to me absolutely beautiful. it brought me to tears, and believe me i know how it feels to have your childhood taken, so god bless you for being able to become a stronger person.

    Lots of love
    Kristi

    • Beatles Girl
      April 9, 2008
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      Thank you. I'm just so grateful to be engaged to a wonderful man who has made me see that life can go on after bad things.


  • Dreanne
    April 3, 2008

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    Awesome!

    This is such a fantastic write, so much of who you are is poured out in these lines. I thank God that you have come through the trials and you are now peaceful...

    I can empathise, God has had such a profound impact on my life too, the hurts and pains are slowly subsiding and peace has arrived...

    I am inspired and challenged by your words, as I am sure many others will be...

    Sam

    • Beatles Girl
      April 3, 2008
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      Thank you so much for reading, enjoying, and commenting! I'm really glad that the talent God gave me has affected so many people in such a powerful way. I hope He blesses you through everything around you today, tomorrow, and forever!
      Much love,
      Kelly


  • Lucky-Charm
    April 2, 2008

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    This is very touching and heartfelt! Powerful words behind a wounded vessel...but patched back up with the help of God.Very nicely written!! Thank you and goodluck.

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