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Spinning On My Acts ("Is"...)

AreSun's nice (I know)
He mesmerizes and burns it up with his lava flowz
And while your grinding and showing your teeth
I generate lakes of magma from deep beneath
the origin of AreSun's lava is under your feet

I keep you grounded and feed you 'til you're full
You can't drift away from my gravitational pull

I've been a temporary housing for billions of men
How seldom have I ever called a single one "friend"?

I have mountains that stabilize me
That thousands scaled (yelling, "I'm free!")
You have eyes but you can't see
That you grew up because you suckled from me

My child is your General who absorbs (even) acid rain
I am the Mother Earth covered by Terrain

Steady your steps, lest you drop in my sink-hole
Macabre thinking levelled your soul
Humble yourself child
Learn your role
A temporary abode in me (is your goal)

Your voice is muted while you scream silent shouts
Now that's something to THINK about...

Author notes

This another installment in the WiseWithWordz series, "The THINKER's Word Warz". This is just for fun and creative writing practice between collaborators. Hope you enjoy! (The reader will get a fuller 'feel' for this on-going battle by crossing-over to the related sites for the other writer's responses to this or earlier pieces).

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  • xPink-Lotusx
    April 20, 2008
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    Haha! I could not have said it better myself.. LOL!


  • Itahed
    April 3, 2008
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    BAM!!!!!

    you grew up because you suckled from me.... fabulous !


    • AsIThink gold member
      April 5, 2008
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      Thank you for the read. This THINKER character has roamed my lands freely for too long. And has pollutated my streams. I figure it's Spring Cleaning time (lol).

      ---Earth.


  • moluv10
    April 3, 2008

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    This THIKER just brings everybody out doesn't he?lol Mother Earth must have had enough of these "thoughts".lol Go get 'em! The Wonderous Worderer no.2 isn't too far behind...lol


    • AsIThink gold member
      April 5, 2008
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      lol. The THINKER has unwittingly, outwitted himself. Thanks for the comments (I could have stayed on the side-lines but 'Earth Day' is coming...I'll be planting seeds for a while.

      ---Earth.


  • Swangrnv gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    Hmm...

    Another player in the game of war? Interesting I thinks to myself(poison pen) we'll see where this thing goes next before I decide who my pen sticks in the neck! l.o.l. yeah yeah! this is N.I.C.E. keep em coming kid!


    • AsIThink gold member
      April 5, 2008
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      LOL...come on in and dine with me. I'm serving cheese with whines. Thanks for the comments.

      ---Earth.

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