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Enchanting

A mysterious blue haze surrounds the moon
Blankets of clouds glide with the breeze
Twilight glistens on blades of grass
It’s silvery hands stretching with ease

Sparkling beams cast blinding lights
Revealing the misty beginnings of dawn
As creatures of day stir into life
Shadows retreat, soon to be gone

Flaming rays of sunshine
Embrace the changing leaves
Scents of roses combine
Lost in peaceful melodies

Waterfalls dance so charmingly
As wandering winds paint the sky
Voices of mountains sing joyously
While rippling waters reflect their reply

Diamonds stud the velvet sky
Cradled by the porcelain moon
Glistening raindrops sing lullabies
While nightly flowers begin to bloom

What speaks to you? What do you feel?

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  • going nowhere
    April 3, 2008

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    i like how you write, with a smooth touch combined with the words you choose is indeed enchanting...