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pride

pride is a problem
beta blocker, suppressor, slower
clamping my throat
when she fishes by the stream
reeling lines like candy through cloudy woodland
composition of her words etching a sinister repercussion
in my ego centric mind

why am i wired like this?
a fortress of walls, only walls
spires reaching curling down vine-like to lull
a slippy slidey slope
only to silence

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