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My Love

The light slowly starts
To filter into the window
The first time that we curse
The beginning of a new day

We made the night last
As long as we could
Holding each other as tight as we can
Hoping against all
That it will never end

But we both know
That night
Could have been our last
Never to see one another again

And as I begin to walk out the door
We say goodbye one last time
With a kiss and a longing glance
While our time together may not have been long
We certainly wouldn’t trade it for anything

And as I take my place on the line
And await the oncoming horde
I want you to know
That my last thoughts are of you
And the time that we shared

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  • veggieyogadrummer
    May 5, 2008

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    Hey cutie! This was good. I hope that, some day, I can inspire you to write something else just as beautiful!


  • bananasfoster42
    April 3, 2008
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    this is really sad but really sweet! awesome write


  • urapns66
    April 2, 2008
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    awesome write! keep it up seriously i can see the improvement!


  • Angelflower
    April 2, 2008

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    this was really sweet.. Sad in a way but really sweet to.. Thank you for this.. It was a great write.. Fillled with lots of emotion which I really like...
    Great write..
    Peace to you, Jetleena

    Oh umm, what would you like to be? Lol.