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Wild and Free

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Creature of the wild

So silent and so free,

Bring to me the freedom

That you feel from day to day.

 

To be within your family

Would balance my life untamed,

To be within your pack

Would give me strength so famed.

Great spirit bring me the spirituality 

And strength of your wild teacher,

So I may be your pupil

And learn to teach your preacher.

Your people know of the power

That this wolf is proclaimed,

They teach of its insightfulness

to train this world untamed. 

 

If only they would learn

The teachings that can be taught,

This world would not be the same

Though we know that’s all for nought.

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  • Ronztrek gold member
    July 12

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    Wise Words...

    Wise words penned out here my friend! I really like how you turned the table, and see our society as untamed, and not the wild, for that could not be truer. Of all the beauty and splendors of the wilderness, I too find my spiritual guide in the magnificent Canis Lupis...

    Has been nice, crossing trails with you in this world untamed here today. Keep penning your teachings; I believe we can all learn from what you've shared. Great Job!

    Ron


  • psycospazz
    April 27
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    very spiritual
  • Deluder
    April 26

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    spiritual

    I enjoyed this piece very much, you make the positive traits of this creature so obvious, i love the confidence you show in the teachings it could bring.
    very nice write thank you ever so much for the wonderful read.


  • dabpunx
    April 19
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    excellent

    enlightened and spiritual. thank you you made me feel at harmony.


  • Tender wolf gold member
    April 2
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    Out Standing my Brother! To have a heart that can see the realness in this magnificent family is to be one that walks with the wolf... There is so much we can learn from them if only we would just take the time...there is a peace within your words and I thank you for sharing them with me

  • Bro, this is spot on, maybe some slight adjustment needed in the set up or display as you say, but the body of the write comes across really well. You captured the essence of the contest with honour. Well done, and Niaish for being there.

    Love unconditional as always Bro,

    Big Bro


  • GrowlingBear gold member
    April 2
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    Sorry Bro

    Didnt seem to come out right in the editing
    My Apologies
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