She twirls them, her hands, beneath
thin droplets settled here, on
petals laced before her eyes
destined to fall anew.
She cradles it her lover, and
supplants its tender touch with
a gentle kiss; carried away from her
lips as "Amor."
And it lingers for a moment, lost among
those others, who have yet to
find their way: now all at once
and never more. So they carry on
upon her, along soft tides and
quiet rifts of she: This majesty,
who reaches forth to them, as they
silently fall away.
So she smiles in soft briliance,
as a supple berth who cradles on
their lonely tears, called to her as
"Bella. Sin ti, yo no puedo vivir."
Author notes
With a sincere gratitude and acknowledgment to Sofia Nadia, who provided the last line Directly translated as "Without you, I could not live" as well are her editing skills which I could not live without .
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This was beautiful, you create such wonderful imagery.
This speaks the word of love in true form. Good Write!
Ali♥
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Beautiful work, as per usual. Will wonders never cease?
I would tell you to keep up the good work, but I know you will.
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this is good...keep it up...i like it.
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beautifuly writen i love it it mainly talken about love and umm well im not sure but its realy good thanks for sharing your writing with us veiwers it would mean alot to me to have such a talented writer you coment one of my poems please it would mean alot to me thanks for sharing i hope to be able to keep reading your poems keep it up
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beautiful write babem like usual. you never cease to amaze me.
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Very excellent! It just gose to show that love poems can be written wright. You did a wounderful job! I like the 3rd paragraph the best...
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Sweet and full of imagery...my heart aches as I read this...
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That was beautiful! i love the last line. Its such a romantic poem. Well done
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