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My Family

My family are my friends at school
They are nice, they are special
and they are cool
We all have lots of love for each other
thats what a family is all about
We care and share and do kind things together
As a family we love one and other
We tell jokes
Then we all laugh about it
Thats what we do
I hope you like it too

They sometimes even help me with situations I can't solve on my own
I can tell my friends secret knowing They are trust worthy
I can believe in them
Knowing they will always have my back if something goes wrong
You always got to put faith
In your family
Just know that every thing is alright

Family isn't just someone you live with
It's the people thats around you
When I go to school
My family is there
Knowing that I love them
And I care for them
They always make me happy
Just knowing that they are around me

We play every day
We always have a way
To show every one what a family is all about
So know that your family is everywhere in this world.

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  • Ellis gold member
    December 23, 2008
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    Excellent

    Good lesson here and good writing.


  • BornWithAPen
    December 23, 2008

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    what struck me the most is the pure innocence in this piece, i wish we could all hang on to the view of the worl that you obviously have, who knows maybe it would be a much prettier world if we did, very beautiful piece whoopie

  • wessxxx
    April 9, 2008
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    hot

    i loved this poem. i hope you do win in this contest.

  • wessxxx
    April 4, 2008
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    nice

    I loved it nice


  • WesBreezyxxx
    April 3, 2008
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    Nice

    Thanks for all the comments. I appriciate it

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    excellent

    Excellent. Kids at school should be considered a second family. After all you see them every day and spend quality time together. Any situation where people are together often creates a family bond. Very nice write. Thanks for entering. Good luck.
    Brian

  • WesBreezyxxx
    April 2, 2008
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    my poems

    My poems all come from my heart. Thay are all very true.

  • Sunshine Princess
    April 2, 2008

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    I like your poem to have people to love you and that you love is a very nice gift have a nice day today

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