I just want to feel the passion of your kiss
to feel your smoldering heat so that I'll melt in bliss
to feel those supple, luscious lips of yours touch my own
you can show me you love me like This.
Or better yet hold me close to you tightly
doesn't matter were we are, what position baby
as long as you're extremely close to me
whether emotionally, physically, mentally, or socially
I just wanna feel your love for me
Touch me anywhere, my face, my chest, anywhere you please
you have my heart, so the rest of me is yours for the taking. Dance with me, to our own song,
let me dip you and into you all night long,
for the greatest expression of love
is the art of making love,
I have my paint brush, and you have your paint
so let us paint a picture between the sheets
and when it's over I'll still love you
and I'll hold you as we reminisce on our master peice
*****Aurielle*****
Well there you said I can touch you anwhere.
What feelings ignite creating a canvass of sacharine sight.
I do want to kiss you passionately
romeo your lips that quench for me are waiting patiently
to faint in my hands like rain as I paint in this tranquil flame.
A touch upon my soul we become an image
though I can't see you now,
you've become this beautiful painting that I'd love to cherish,
to look in and forever be in it.
My love would follow you and never perish
my hand will be the brush down you manframed body
as I place lovely color of sensations,
infatuated colors I gain from these conversations.
I'll kiss you tenderly where love could only wonder
and always you will remember
**blakdiamon***
Rememdber always, I will even in my slumbers
though our flame of love has been expressed in ways so tender
Our emotions become the burning ember
of a calming flame, now tamed
after our expressions of love have stormed and rained
I love you so much, I can't wait to express our love again.
Tell me what you think
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man you know how to work with love in so many different levels and angles...good write and good collab with a powerful poet also
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excellent
Hey Blak, as usually you are amazing. This is very good. Keep it up!!
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You did good with this. I thought it was sensual and soft and it worked. Keep writing.
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I like the ending. You did change my words and add a little I see but its aiight
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i love this. i cant give you my favorite part because the whole thing is amazing. i loved the sexual flow it had and the words that you used to describe your love was very well put. great job.
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I like this a lot because it just flows together. Sexual and sensual entwined. Great write.
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Wow! This is amazing! Er, usually I don't like long poems because I'm to lazy to read them (hehe) but this one without a doubt captured and held my attention to the very end! I wish I could tell you my favorite part but I can't decide! *Insert entire poem here* There, that's my favorite part
Keep up the fantastic work!
xx
V/E
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THIS IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL...PERFECT BALANCE BETWEEN SENSUAL AND LOVING...GOOD WORK U GUYS
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This is perhaps the best poem of read with an erotic tone without getting gross, I dont usually like erotic poetry, which this is at the same time as it isnt. Its more an expression of love than anythign else and beatutifuly done
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