Does he know
that he's all I think about
at night?
Does he know
He's what causes me
to cry?
Does he know?
Does he?
I see my friends
boy and girl
I see the look
in his eyes
I see the blush
Deep red on his face
When she talks to him
I want someone
to look at me
like that
I want someone
to blush
when they look at me
Does he know
that he's all I think about
at night?
Does he know
he's what causes me
to cry?
Does he know?
Does he?
Does he?
Author notes
Nope
A contest entry
- The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1709 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Did this cause any emotion?
Comments
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I feel like you darling... the thing is he does know but hes...mysterious.. diffucult and hard to understand...
I liked this write very much.. I need writes like this now... since heartbreak its at its climax now
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omg i have the same problem going on right now and have written poems on the same issue. i really like how you put your emotion into this and everything
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Great repition and feeling. Is this inspired by the song "Tear Drops on my Guitar"? The first two stanzas are extremely remeniscent of it...Great job!
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♥
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Aww..adorable poem.
I can relate to every single word..
I absolutely love it! It's beautiful,
and yes it does cause emotion..great job!
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beautiful and yet so sad. Great job. I reallt felt this
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Wow
So meaning ful and right to the point Bravo -
man i love this i wish i could write something like this because its positively how i feel. this is my new favorite poem until i find a new one. ohh i just love it.
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luv it!
it is very bittersweet. nice line spacing and the repitition is excellent! keep up the good work!!!!!
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The question never answered...nicely done
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the eternal question, yes...
well penned! -
I like the repetition
well done with good flow
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