• Do you remember those days?
Sister, do you remember those days
The sun shining rays in blaze
Shining sunflowers so ablaze
Do you remember those days?
• Do you remember those days?
Over the horizon we used to gaze
On the seaside, while Gina plays
Watching the mountains in haze
Do you remember those days?
• Do you remember those days?
Once we lived, now we recall
How Gina ran after the round ball
The way it ripped apart your lovely doll
Do you remember those days?
• Do you remember those days?
Once we held now they fled
The ongoing fun that we had
Once we were happy, now so sad
Do you remember those days?
• Do you remember those days?
Gina used to jump
As the waves used to thump
And seashells began to plump
Do you remember those days?
• Do you remember those days?
Over the rocks we sat
Tumbling waves splashing to splat
The gentle breeze stole you hat
Do you remember those days?
• Do you remember those days?
So happy and sweet
The waves tickling under our feet
Crabs cracking under the summer’s heat
Do you remember those days?
A contest entry
- " Memories" by wingsofgold25.
500 points, ended May 29, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Memories by Rovingone.
900 points, ended June 13, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That was a sweet writing about some very wonderful memories. Who was Gina?
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thanks for your comment hun im glad you like it
i miss those days a lot 
gina was our puppy :S she died :S i so misss her
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you sure took me down memory lane to my younger days on the chesapeak bay.
This was real nice and very well written.
Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest -
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heyy thanks for the trophy hun i reallly appreciate and iam so thankful that you liked my write and preferred it among all the other great ones thank you loadsz
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thankss for your time of reading and commenting and thanks a lot for accepting my entry
many thanks,
Bedig
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sorry, one of the only rules to the contest is no rhyming. i'm going to have to disqualify this piece.
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This is captivating with the repeating line that introduces each stanza. I think you did a wonderful job with the prompt.
Love,
Amera♥
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