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Imperfection Nécessaire

Hair a streaky golden blonde
Blown wild by a random chaos
Yeux plus bleus que demis le monde
Plus des couleurs de beiges et cacaos

A smile that lights even the darkest room
Crooked teeth that no one seems to notice
Dansant aussi légèrement qu'une plume
Personne jette un oeil accusatrice

I am flawed in every way
Thoughts don't match the words I say
But I'd rather be flawed and free
Than perfecly chained unhappily

Si tu veux aller avec moi
Ce serait aussi simple que suivre
A un endroit où
La vie est habitée libre

Author notes

French meanings:

Yeux plus bleus que demis le monde
Plus des couleurs de beiges et cacaos

Eyes bluer than half the world
More than the beiges and cocoa colors

Dansant aussi légèrement qu'une plume
Personne jette un oeil accusatrice

Dancing as lightly as a feather
No one throws an accusatory eye (glance)


Si tu veux aller avec moi
Ce serait aussi simple que suivre
A un endroit où
La vie est habitée libre

If you want to come with me
It would be as simple as to follow
To a place where
Life is lived free

If you read the poem in it's entirety in english it doesn't rhyme, but hey, what can you expect?? lol

Hope you like it ;P

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  • 2lullabyhaven
    April 25, 2008
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    Simple elegance; thanks for your submission and good luck


  • Gasp
    April 9, 2008
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    very nice i like it. i like how you mixxed the two languages. tyvm for entering!!


  • nikkia
    April 3, 2008
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    C'EST TRES MAGNIFIQUE!