i think i shall never
be the one
to set quietly
under the earth or stars
with out my voice
to linger on and say nothing
to allow the destruction
to continue each day as if
it was or never happend
iwould never show irrogance
or that i was dull
to the senses
i would have been a secret warrior
risking all
just even for the freedom of one
A contest entry
- Quotes by warrior-eagle.
300 points, ended April 16, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Love it strong and moving well done
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What a view of the self and its place in the life..you are very strong in your own sketch..I love it..well done...
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Amazing write, this is how I feel in life, if I can help only one person then I have made a difference. I so enjoyed reading this morning, keep up the great writing. Good luck in the contest my friend.
Theresa
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Thanks for your entry.
The last stanza wow,was awesome.
..Simply Me♥ -
Isabelwk
Very poignant! Nicely done
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Words of wisdom
Very powerful words you have written here.
I found myself in these words of your.
Great job & Good luck in the contest!
~Ron~
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beautifully worded... good luck in the contest.
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well done raggy ..yes you are a fine warrior of peace xx
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true thoughts. great lines. The worst thing is America
should have no need of secret warriors. then again, we may not be truly free.
See you have your heart on
your sleeve again. smile.
At least you know where it is.
smile.
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Wow Raggy! This is a great write. Good luck!
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Excellent Contest entry--very well written & versed--very thought provoking--
Well Done & Best of luck in the Contest!
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this is a very profound write. you send a great message for us all. good job!
Mary
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