Your eyes glimmer in the sunlight;
when you stare into my own.
Your lips are of a soft;
and gentle earthly tone.
I watched you walk by me;
I noticed the other day.
You seen me from afar;
and looked at me that way.
We have talked awhile now;
every day on the phone.
I have something to tell you;
a secret of my own.
I want to tell you desperately;
and make you understand.
What I have to tell you;
will hopefully make you my man.
I giggle when you walk by;
because I like you so.
But how do I tell you;
so that you too can know.
I think I will call you;
tonight we will discuss.
By tomorrow you will be my man;
and that, is definitely a plus.
A contest entry
- The Ultimate Goal by N e a r.
20000 points, ended June 2, 2008, 929 entries
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so this is a very very good poem. But I am female and if you are seducing me, writing a poem for a man is kinda insulting and not what I am looking for, no offence.
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i mean "slang" sorry lol
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fab-u-lo-so. very old style slanf for Fabulous ! hehe. I loved the way it all rhymed and just the whole flow of everything, it was pretty great i'd say. =)
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awww this is such a beautiful write and I love the rhyming and the whole way your words flow throughout it well done with this auntie
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Very good structure in the rhyming verse---Excellent flow!
'Lucky Guy' He will be
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