Fourteen years old:
Accidental caresses while playing tag
Sitting too close on the couch.
Our first kiss in the backseat of the old Taurus.
Picking out our dream house in the Sunday ads.
Your beautiful blue eyes took me away-
part of me never came back
I still love you
A contest entry
- Semi Quickie: PIF 10/50 by Valley Girl.
300 points, ended April 2, 2008, 7 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This can't help but bring back memories, in particular if you marry your childhood sweetheart. I love the last two lines..a lot said there. Congratulations on your shiny Silver award.
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A lovely poem you have penned. A nice take on the prompt. Congratulations on winning Silver. Take care, Sandy
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Not as much room as the backseat of my 61 caddy but thanks for making me remember. You have painted a nice picture with your words.
Peace in light and love
Noah
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aww your pen is sooo cute!
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Aww this is gorgeous! I love this write, I felt like I was there, Good old Taurus lol. Thank you for entering my contest, best of luck.
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