And now is the time for judgement;
Stand and bellow out your final tune.
Shifty eyes appear in walls,
watching you fall,
f
a
l
l...but will you land on your feet?
Your a soldier; A fighter;
Brave the darkened hallways to find the stage!
Put every actor and actress to shame,
take your claim.
And now is the time for judgement;
Your future is in the audience.
Author notes
I have an audition coming up and im freaking nervous!
A contest entry
- raw by lalaland024.
3006 points, ended April 3, 2008, 13 entries
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Comments
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the use of fall with scattered lettering really adds to the effect. nice piece and thanks for entering
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Dang. This is one hell of a poem! "f a l l...but will you land on your feet?" LOVE that part. This poem is bursting from its seams. It is just amazing. Brilliance in poetry. Nice job!! I can just feel the emotion from this one.
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