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Broken (haiku trio)





Upon the hilled crest
lie the bones of broken trust
so freely given

whitewashed in layers
of innuendo, remains
of a stolen life

the resurrection
anticipated blooming
in petals of weeds.





©2008
4-2-08


Author notes

Written for the contest: QUICK CONTEST; HAIKU by Lyrical Outburst
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2398615

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