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A lovers bed

I held my angel and whispered good-bye
Who knew that I would finally die
By her side she begged me to stay
Can't believe I walked away

She kissed my lips with tears in her eyes
Swore in a dream she had seen my demise
I promised her I would return once more
Before I walked out our bedroom door

To the battle I rode with much haste
Her kiss upon my lips, I could taste
Tears I couldn't shake from my mind
As our lands I left far behind

The battle raged like a storm around me
She was all that I could see
Draped in sheets of silk and satin
I cursed my love for battle again

I kissed my blade named for her
And with that gave my horse a spur
Into the fray, I rode to settle the score
So I could be home with her once more

I never seen the arrow that pierced my heart
Nor how my whole life started to fall apart
The world spun around me in a silent display
To her, My thoughts could not but help stray

Blood stained lips whispered I love you
As a blades point run me through
I closed my eyes with a heart full of dread
For never again would I lay in my lovers bed.

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  • demonheart
    April 15, 2008
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    I think it is beatifully puttin and i love it


  • Angelflower
    April 2, 2008
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    This was so beautiful! It brought tears to my eyes.. Oh this is the man I once knew, who could write such beautiful poetry... Though this was sad, beauty was in every word..
    I really really liked this.. Great write hun. I've missed you!!

    Peace to you, Jetleena


  • Lost Vampyre Angel
    April 2, 2008

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    this bought tears to my eyes,
    i love it,
    your such an amazing writer and man,
    and im sorry, for preety much everything,


  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    April 2, 2008

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    Meep

    I love the last part =D I am really not into the whole damsel and knight fiasco, but this is still cute with a good story and it's put simply with little details instead of specifics which works out well because it keeps the focus ^.^