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A silence


A silence
Calm after the storm
Days golden, now silver
Tainted, oxidised slightly
Tarnished.

Deleted.
A message hidden there
Subtle, simple
Still screams obvious

A silence waiting to be broken
A churning,
Burning acidity
Anticipation with hooked barbs of sticklebacks
Mating inside the gut.

A contest entry

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  • Dienush
    April 2, 2008

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    Wow, the imagery in this is truly stunning, I love every bit of it. I have a feeling this contest will be hard to judge Thank you for entering.

    ~Diana