What does it take
To shatter this illusion?
Make light of your delusion?
The signs are showing through
The end of it is starting now
Hallowed holocaust ignited
This glamour is unforgiving
Blinding sheen of the damned.
What did you think
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wowe! this is really a great piece. it was deep, and in such little words, you were able to express yourself pretty well. keep penning!
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Damn Stuart...
I don't know how you do it...
Your talent shouldn't be wasted babe...
I really wish you'd get back into writing a bit more... -
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I try. Every other day, at least, I sit down with a good idea that I want to put on paper. I get halfway through and am usually overcome. Either by pain, or doubt, or hate. One day, I'll find a way to push through that, though. Thank you for reading it. This was one of my better recent poems, I thought.
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