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Conscience

Screams echoing through your veins
Fear and rage boiling under your skin
Did you really think you could escape me?
Poor child, so far from home
But you bleed so pretty
Yes, again
Harder this time
No one hears you
Try and stop me, little bitch
You always fail
Always come back to show me what you've done
Hate them, break them apart
Hurt them like they've done to you a thousand times before
No!
Block me out, run away
Bad girl, don't think so dirty
Punish youself, just one more time
Not all the wounds inflicted are taken with a fist
Fall asleep, stay and dream
Cry so soft, and smile, crimson beauty
But you'll never be rid of me
And one day you'll listen

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  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 25, 2008

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    Good poem but I'm afraid you're beyond the age of users I want in this contest. It's for 14 and younger; you're 15. Sorry.
    Brian

  • saretyuiop
    April 2, 2008
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    Beautiful. Well written