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Studio at Midnight



I had a studio in 1970
on Wabash avenue in the Loop
third floor up on EL train level
Rose's Records right next door

I was crazy then
painted big things that didn't matter
to satisfy Art Institute advisors
I used day-glo paints and
risked a life of lung time neon care

At night when rain would mist the city
I'd turn out lights
watch the movement on the streets
dolls and hookers, debutants
salesman, sailors, small time cons

beggars, cooks and stand up comics,

Chicago doesn't sleep

Trains would clatter, screech, grind by
empty yellow windows, a blur of empty faces
I'd wave anyway


watch my fingers glowing in the air


 

 

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'Studio at Midnight' challenge poem with Delaney

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  • Zayra Yves gold member
    April 6
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    This is one of my favorite poems today. I love Chicago and you have brilliantly woven many other images into this poem...the people, the movement of the streets, the trains...I could feel it all along with the cold wind whipping through my hair and making my eyes water.


  • malmadre gold member
    April 4

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    This is almost like you are describing one of your own paintings. If we could live within our art, my world might look like something by Bosch...Ha!
    This is very nice David!

  • ecrivain01 silver member
    April 3
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    Very nice ...

    and very nicely done.


  • Dalaney gold member
    April 2
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    remember....when i first met you and i was enthralled by your poetry because it was like stepping back into time and actually being there...well, you still "enthrall" me, you still excite my imagination, and yeah, I should have been there...My love, Lane

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