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C. Fox Smith

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C. Fox Smith was a poet most prolific,
She crossed the Atlantic to the Pacific;
The Great Age of Sail
Made many a fine tale,
But if you get sea sick, it's horrific!



Cheerily,
Charley Noble

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Here's a link to her page at Oldpoetry: http://oldpoetry.com/oauthor/show/Cicely_Fox_Smith

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  • poetryality silver member
    April 7, 2008
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    Loved it!




    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • Charley Noble silver member
    April 2, 2008
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    An even better last line would be:

    But if you get sea sick, it's horrific!

    I'll edit the original but I'm not sure that's quite fair.

    Charley Noble


  • rufina caraid gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    I would never have guessed CFS would have been your favourite topic Charley. the picture alone has made me feel quite queasy lol ~Von~


  • I-Like-Rhymes gold member
    April 2, 2008
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    Nice one Charlie.
    Jim