Trembling hands hold trusT,
Heated eyes seek beauty in a dasH -
Everything seen through this haze is a farcE.
Entering a new phasE -
You mistake me for a beautY
Entertaining thoughts of lust and lovE ...
Openly i push your comments aside as taboO,
Forever filed where dust collects and elegance is alooF.
Truth is spoken through Your gaze, ever sofT,
Hidden adulation now transparent by each sigH -
Erosion of ugliness painted by my tainted bristlE ...
Masterfully You sway like a penduluM -
Artistically swimming through my soul as glistening as aquA;
Solid foundation found in Your handS.
Treated before like a throw-away delinquenT,
Easily squeezed into Your lifE ...
Rest assured - Your name is carved on my heart with a love so tendeR.
Author notes
A shadow acrostic
For Tattboy ... my life, my love ...
A contest entry
- . by Aurora Ceres.
600 points, ended April 14, 2008, 17 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love this thank you for sharing
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Wow...a double! Good work! Congratulations on your Bronze trophy.
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beautifually done, thank you
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My darling darling pet,
Thank you for being Mine.
And thank you for writing this, it is beautiful!
Just one thing wrong ...
you write "You mistake me for a beautY"
That is completely wrong. you ARE a beauty!!!
Your Loving Master
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Oh hun, He is sooo going to love this. I love the way you did this form of poetry. Perfectly done. I know that you guys have something special and every time I read anything you dedicate to Him, I am more convinced that you belong together.
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Oh chantell you have done a wonderful tribute to your handsome Master here, and also to a wonderful way of life. I'm sure your name is carved on His heart too.
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Stunningly-beautiful. I am sure he will love this Tatts. It is wonderful writing indeed. Well done. The flow and depth of this piece is really very strong.
Love
Wayne Leon
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