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cut out

I cut out from you my heart,
Why should you have it anyway,
Your no good to me,
I found the real love and your old news,

So piss off and go back to your other whore's.
Let us have are peace,
and walk down and become husband and wife.

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Goodbye to the old love hello to the new love.

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  • Brokenpoetry123
    April 3, 2008
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    Nice poem. I hope everything turns out good with your new love. Your grammar is a little sketchy but it does not take away from the meaning of the poem. It is like you are welcoming the new beginning while at the same time scorning the old one. The title pretty much explains what the whole story is about.
    Good luck,
    Chloe