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Dreams Of You

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Dreams of a kiss that could never be,
sweet lips pressed on mine tenderly.
Slumber brings longing to be with you,
stirring senses the whole night through.

Thoughts repeated as I reminisce,
within my dreams I long for your kiss.
As you drift in and out of my mind,
harsh reality is left behind.

Cherished moments of our embrace,
as I close my eyes I see your face.
Sweet lips searching from head to toe,
my river of dreams ever gently flow.

Nobody can take my dreams away,
long for your kiss to be real someday.
Till then come love me and hold me tight,
pleasure me in my dreams each night.


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  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 17, 2008
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    Did you mean: reminisce

  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    April 10, 2008
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    Keep dreaming.

    This was just... wonderfully written.


  • DrunkenRam
    April 6, 2008

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    oh wow! this is a heart stopper, this is publishable.
    you should look into publishing some of your work, it that good, and needs to be shared for the Art that it is.


    • Sandygram silver member
      April 6, 2008
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      Lovely Comment

      Hello, Thank you for stopping by and reading my poetry. I enjoyed reading your very nice comment.

      You take care,
      Sandy


  • jasminerose
    April 2, 2008

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    Breathtakingly beautiful my dear friend! Your words float across the page with beauty, grace and hope for all to enjoy!
    "Till then come love me and hold me tight,
    pleasure me in my dreams each night"....sigh~
    Beautiful as always
    Linda


    • Sandygram silver member
      April 3, 2008
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      Lovely Comment

      My sweet friend, Thsnk you for reading my poem. You do know and feel the depth of my words. We can always dream. They are ours and we never have to give them away if we don't want to. Bless you always. Hope all is going well with you.

      Love You,
      Sandy


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    April 2, 2008

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    oh grammy this is a simply beautiful piece and the detail and emotions that run throughout it. well done grammy

    • Sandygram silver member
      April 3, 2008
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      Wonderful comment dear grandaughter. Hugs and Smile

      Love you,
      Grammy


  • wildfiredreamer
    April 2, 2008

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    This is lovely, beautifully written. It reminds me of one I have such sweet dreams about. I like when dreams are like hopes or wishes. God bless you,

    good luck in the contest, this one has won a place in my heart.

    • Sandygram silver member
      April 3, 2008
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      Your comment was so nice. Thank you for stopping by.

      Take care,
      Sandy

  • icywind55
    April 2, 2008

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    This is wonderful piece so full of desire, passion and love. You continue to take my breath away. You continue to inspire me to seek out love at it best. You words flow so well and bring the reader into your dream world of hope and love. WOW it is amazing what you can do with words...


    • Sandygram silver member
      April 3, 2008
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      Beautiful Comment

      Hello dear friend, Thank you for the wonderful comment. I am glad my poetry can inspire you, it does make me smile. I hope you are enjoying your trip and looking at the heavenly stars in the sky up there. Bless you dear friend. My thoughts and prayers are with you always.


      Love Always,
      Sandy

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