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life....do i really want it??

i watch all the lovers
live their love

i see all the kids
wasting their childhood

i watch all the old people
waiting for death

and wonder...
why is this world such a mess??

i guess thats just the way
its supposed to be
and now im asking me...
do i wanna go through all this
or leave the world with not one wish??

errmm i dont know what i was thinking when i wrote this....

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  • know one
    April 4, 2008
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    Cool

    I like the consepts and idears in this poem....great write