inside my mind i remember when
i climbed the dark stairways
and felt the wind of freedom
ahh to walk that fine line
so young was i
now i walk the in the light
aged like fine wine
and thank GOD
for his set of foot prints
in the sand
Please tell me what you think
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Where there is dark, there too is light. A very beautiful piece of writing Raggy. Short, but very profound.
Dark
Wishes
Wayne Leon
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Ah..very motivating and curious piece releasing a sense of the peace around your words..wonderful task you did..wonderful work...
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great analogy-the set of footprints in the sand-and how so many can come out from their youth to suddenly,one day. see those footprints; right in front of them-that which was there all the time...excellent peom.
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I agree that experiences help brighten our lives and leave deeper footrpints in the sands of time than one
whom remains in the dark.
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An excellent piece that is well versed with an abundance of imagery--Well Done --Favorite Stanza is
"Now I walk the in the light
aged like fine wine
and thank GOD
for his set of foot prints
in the sand"
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Beautiful!!! I truly enjoyed this read. I love spiritual poetry and this one is simply wonderful!!
Mary
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"ah to walk that fine line so young was i" a statement many can relate to my friend. The entire poem is reality. I thank God everyday. A wonderful well written poem. Peace in light and love.
Noah
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thank you my friend
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