Purple pageantry
souls parade
dimensions
barely comprehended
Disaffected,
misdirected see
linear progress
unconnected
Enlightened souls
envision circles
radii, tangents, arcs
link present, future, past
Demagogue charlatans
forge mystical roadmaps
pretences of wisdom
furthering regimes
Pure of heart,
unfettered minds
know, without seeing;
marvel at the panoply
In a list
A contest entry
- THE PROMPT CHALLENGE # 3 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very nicely penned.
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Words within words and an unusual perception of the prompt. Highly original.
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You definitely have a way with your words!! They are so in accordance with the theme of your poetry!! You use so many varied aspects in your poetry! It is very impressive and of course I love ur author notes
MY fav lines:
Enlightened souls
envision circles
radii, tangents, arcs
link present, future, past
Like the refrence of the prompt to maths..
thanks for entering and good luck!
pri
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A superbly penned poem. Really brought out the essence of the picture. All the best in the contest with it
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