genius
in street clothes
envisioning reality
as only he knows
akin
to street performer
strumming, juggling
fleeting glance transformer
entwined
in life's panorama
translating minutia
to brilliant psychodrama
captured
in poetic drama
living inside
his self-made diorama
pictured
in super-hero costume
genius portraying
what mere mortals dare not assume
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I find this an apt description of this gifted, perceptive young man "entwined in life's panorama" who shares his astute observations "in poetic drama". This might make a nice profile poem for him. Bravo, dear lady.
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Leah, so nice of you to look in here.
Glad you found this descriptive piece,
as well as his writings.
Thank you!
Aesthete
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living inside
his self-made diorama
Sounds like me, lol
But that is the man/woman of genius, how they fly, how they create, and whether you were being specific or generalizing, the point is the same. This is quite good btw.
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Thank you, Keystone.
The words arose when reading
the daily entries of a writer
who comments here frequently,
but they would fit other wise
writers who see the world uniquely
and express that view with individuality.
And that, Keystone, would be YOU
and your other entities.
In fact, a pretty perfect description
from what I have observed!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Ah but you'll change your mind if you ever read my lame cow and moose stories, lol
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I am warned but optimistic!
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Excellent
Wonderfully expressed. Terrific glimpses in such masterful creation.
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penman,
thank you for the visit
and the very nice words!
Aesthete
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I experience care-freeness in this 'genius' who is akin to none, but entwined, captured and pictured as a three-dimensional character in others. This individual unafraid to be human is the envy of others, but because of reason can not display these characteristics. A brief resume: he/she is an individual without pretence. The moral: a dream others can only afford themselves. My observation: a pity that we have lost this care-freeness at the expense of pride and fear. [I hope that I have interpreted this correctly – notwithstanding, I have enjoyed this write].
Frans
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Frans, you are uncanny in your observations!
If you check out the work of bozoloper,
seeing through the "windshield" of his eyes,
you will see how he fits the description.
And too modest he is to comment on this piece!
Thank you so much for your interpretation.
Aesthete
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intriguing
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Olivia, you many want to check out the work
of bozoloper, who frequently comments
here, and you will see the picture.
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