Denim ebony overhangs.
Physique umber bare
Curvature's engulfed
with passion divine.
Fire burns in
a rustic ember.
Arms embraced
with blushing linen.
As the amorous
aerosol reaches
its final peak.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- Semi Quickie Picture Prompt - PIF - by Reptile Lady by Reptile Lady.
475 points, ended April 3, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make eyes sparkle with your words by ladame.
450 points, ended June 1, 2008, 21 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Succinct and well-chosen words - a refreshing combination.
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Stunning take on what I presume to be a picture-inspired write.
Lovely use of rhythm, CORRECT GRAMMAR
, and beautifully-chosen words.
Author notes...maybe I'm a bit quick to read this, but just have a re-read if you don't know what I mean.
Thank you.
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Painted words breathes perfect imagery..
As the amorous
aerosol reaches
its final peak.
Wow thats powerful
Thank you for your entry and good luck
Julie -
Your word choice was beautiful and led itself to wonderful imagery perfectly....Well done and best of luck
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your vocabulary is put to good use here. the picture is softly described. thank you for sharing with the group.
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This is very beautiful! I was going to enter that very same contest, but couldn't think of anything to write. Good luck with the contest...
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Excellent composition---I was looking for favorite lines, but they're ALL Excellent--Well Done!!--Good Luck in the contest!!
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Totally captured all the picture in a beautifully sensual write! Well done!
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