Above a cove lays the
golden vault of heaven.
Down below this rise
is the river of death.
The bright side takes
the good souls from earth
The dark side comes to
reach for the evil souls.
But Dr death will take all.
A heavenly angel arrives
to stop Dr deaths cause.
She beams with alabaster
rays to stop his evil ways.
She leads the good souls
to the white lights.
While Dr death leads the
evil souls to the darkness.
But the animals fight to
find there way through
the gates of heaven and
not the gates of hell
Author notes
promt challange #3
A contest entry
- THE PROMPT CHALLENGE # 3 by phoenixonfire.
300 points, ended April 10, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Firstly like LAdy Dementia says this is really unique! The refrence to ' Dr death' gives a reality to what death is! I love the phrase alabaster and the refrence to the cove! Poets barely use such lovely phrases these days!!
MY FAV LINES:
But the animals fight to
find there way through
the gates of heaven and
not the gates of hell
Very enigmatic lines..leaves the reader to ponder over ur words!!
Thanks for entering and good luck!!
pri
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A very unique take on the prompt. Created some fine imagery, enjoyable to read. All the best in the contest
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Excellent imagery in this composition and also an excellent take on the prompt--very well done--best of luck to you in the contest!!
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