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Poetry's Beautiful Pussy

 

 

 

Poetry pants as pleasure's warm perfume
trickles from her seductive rippled sighs.
"Please take me hard, sweet poet, from behind?"
Her request is pondered then smoothly plucked.

Flicked over with gracious style her wet bloom
is displayed before generous blue eyes,
the world's magical currents are refined
as her beautiful pussy's violently fucked.

Sensual screams bounce moans around the room,
a treasure chest heaves as his cock's full-size
pounds rhythm directly into her mind,
a high class lady devours rough conduct.

Heavenly flutters of wild wings consume
while she sets light to all of her fast cries,
his flight of starlight is quickly streamlined,
he pulls language out and waits to be sucked.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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i n d i v i d u a l i t y http://stores.lulu.com/chasingtheday



Mind Your P's And Q's Please - The Fuck You Song!

Fuck you, yes fucking you, you fucking fuck,
fuck off, yes fuck off and fuck you, you fuck.

O' fuck you, you fucking twat, just fuck off,
eat shit and scream like a fucking halfwit
then piss your fucking pants, o' and shit too,
it will make you a nicer fucking fuck.

What a fucking arse wipe, you fucking cunt,
fuck off and die in some dead fucking end.

Mind your p's and q's please, or just fuck off
and never fucking come back, you sad fuck.

Thank you, and goodnight, you fucking sick fucks,
you have been a wonderful audience.

No, I will not do a fucking encore,
this fucking song is over, fuck off home.





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  • IxI
    2 days ago
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    oh and the song is kind of weird. can you clarify is it song lyrics that already exist or a song you wrote?

  • IxI
    2 days ago
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    really awesome work here. I love the dirty raw lust between the words. a great idea and pulled off better than you imagined it would im sure. The only thing that sucks about reading this is now im sure poetry is cheating on me, and now I have to go get a paternity test for Poetry Jr.
    Fuck never believe a word poetry tells you. Shes a lying fucking whore, but damn if she isnt sexy as hell.


  • John Faulkner
    November 13
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    So creative. Ian..I feel strange reading your poems..Your talent melts me truly

    John


  • Debra A Baugh gold member
    November 12
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    well which one should I critique the poetry's beautiful pussy or the fuck song......i'm torn so I won't critique either......I'll just say they were very interesting reading......love peace & harmony.......the song was jolting......could have paired that with another poem but, not poetry's beautiful pussy.....


  • george the 23rd
    November 12
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  • Dreoz
    November 12
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    Must be sum'n I missed

    ? ? ?


  • MusicBoxMetaphor
    November 12
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    I must say that this gave me a chuckle. Erotic? Yes. Humorous. Very.

    Thanks for sharing!


  • Sky Princess
    November 12
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    great job!


  • Howl- gold member
    November 12
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    i loved this. so sexual but compelling at the same time.
    great work!


  • The Rivaling Mimic
    November 12
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    It's strange to see the context of this poem put into...well, a poem lol. I found it to be effective on a certain level and applaud your efforts.


  • Karayan
    November 12
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    the poems, great. the song, not so great.


  • TheXOnlyXone21
    November 12
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    very interesting concept. I was really impressed. Well done my friend. and Keep up the good work.

  • paul england
    November 12
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    nice

    there both good i never leave good comment to honest but there both good the fuck you song had me laughing class


  • trublu09
    November 12
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    Wow! What a great poem. I found myself completely aroused. However, I was thrilled with the song. I can only think of being taken hard from behind.


  • Draconian
    November 12
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    interesting context of words, mixed & varied. but all come together to make be.


  • Dulcima
    November 11

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    Taken from behind






    When first you took me from behind,
    you found I wasn’t disinclined:
    but, then, you'd known when we first met
    the love I sought was less than kind.

    And soon it was an act unsaid:
    I’d wait all-foured upon your bed
    for you, observing etiquette,
    to lick my back from hip to head.

    But now we always fuck like this:
    no meeting eyes, no lovers’ kiss –
    perhaps it helps us to forget
    precisely who the other is.

  • kay772
    October 26
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    nice write. i enjoyed it. good job and good luck in the contest. it had a very different perspective. i like i


  • The kiss is Thirst gold member
    October 26
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  • earth bound misfit
    October 20
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    angry and erotic

    Love the fuck song! the first one aroused me!


  • usually-untitled
    October 11

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    i cannot express to you how hilarious this whole thing becomes when you have the site set to filter profanity with *bunny.* i spent half the time giggling madly and the other half trying to figure out which swears were which.


  • cc
    October 8

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    Poetry's Beautiful Pussy is winderfully seductive in the way you make us remember how we feel when we read the writen verse. Its hard to get somethings in writing and when one cdan it is amazing to the mind. Somethings I read I wonder how it feels to know the words, really know them. You set forth the meotions like a tangable object and it feels soft and warm.


  • Camille Morin gold member
    October 6
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    Magnificent

    I love this piece so much, the wonderful language you have chosen, likening this art to fucking.  And it is a seduction, after all, isn't it, albeit one that perhaps only artists understand?  I cannot get enough of the vision and interpretation of life I can absorb from talented people like you.

    This is truly delicious writing,

    Camille


  • Net
    October 4

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    Why do people take this so seriously. It's a poem not a death curse! It is a beautifully writen Poem that can be read two ways. That is what makes it so beautifully appealing.

    I really think some people need to lighten up and not take things so seriously.

    I enjoy this poem over and over again. It is clever


  • Wytch Leygh
    October 3

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    *giggle*

    I don't know if you meant it this way...but it made me giggle so much. hmmm. that might be the crack speaking just kidding. you're totally amazing, keep writing sweetie

  • mikeyJ27
    October 3
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    i thought it was pretty shitt


  • hockey-princess
    October 3
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    Umm no

    I am sorry to say that this just reduces poetry to gutter language!


  • sensualbutterfly
    October 3

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    I have seen this feature many times and was reluctant to click, glad I finally did as that was an amazing write! I love how you made it so erotic and so sensual. What a wonderful way to view poetry!


  • BellaBaby
    October 3
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    WOW! I've never seen poetry in that light. Great job! That was HOT!! MORE MORE!


  • AngelBellerose gold member
    October 3
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    this is an awesome poem sensuous and
    seductive well penned Hugs Angel♥

  • mythologicalshapes
    September 29
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    I like it. Thank you.


  • individuality gold member
    September 27
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  • Macsword
    September 27

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    I clicked...

    "Return the Favor" and now I'm just cracking up. 400 plus comments....probably half are emoticons from your casche. But I have to tell you this is a crackpot piece of imaginatively displayed humor. It never needed to be deep or meaningful because it simply fits a reason for your having writen it in the forst place. I will not leaf throug 400 plus comments, but I will add my laughter because the write kicks me right in my irreverence. Poet, you are frigging insane. But in the most delightful way.

  • individuality gold member
    September 27
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    Puckered Romance

    The poet bends her will to poetry,
    she's a wild scream of buttered endearment
    as he sheds her skin's rippled performance,
    he roams her soft sighs in plain view of all.

    Screams flip moisture's sensuality,
    mythical wisps make her sweet mind absent
    while whips strike the face of puckered romance,
    warm waters seep as he sets to enthral.

    Moans of pleasure slice her complexity,
    winged fascination flaps moonlight's current
    for she is lost in the dream of his dance,
    in another time her spirit will fall.

    Love on the cusp of ruffled mystery,
    a wine tasted before the day's descent,
    all the sirens of old are now entranced,
    feathered cries devour creative scrawl.



    • The kiss is Thirst gold member
      October 2

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      oh - another poem hidden in the comments. I love this one too and had no idea it was part of a set! You stun me! I loved that one too


  • individuality gold member
    September 27
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    September 27
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    September 27
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  • individuality gold member
    September 27
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    angelina jolie; naked


  • individuality gold member
    September 27
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    September 27
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    September 27
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  • TheOnlyPhaze
    September 26
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    Man this was very amusing to read thats all i should have to say

  • individuality gold member
    September 26
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    what a lovely poem you have here indi.
    thanks indi. i like it.
    i especially like the ending section, we all like to be sucked.
    my thumb does!


  • individuality gold member
    September 26
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    read


  • individuality gold member
    September 26
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    the
    .


  • individuality gold member
    September 26
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    poem


  • individuality gold member
    September 26
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    not


  • individuality gold member
    September 26
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    the


  • individuality gold member
    September 26
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    comments

  • individuality gold member
    September 25
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    Warning - Adult Content - Do Not Click In If Offended.

    There's a fight going on, over a poem,
    the world's in uproar for it's adult work.
    I must be a berk, I might need to jerk
    off the madness that is sweet poetry.



  • The kiss is Thirst gold member
    September 25
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    I love this poem! It is so very cleverly written by someone with an intelligent mind and great skill.

    I stand by my original comment!

    • individuality gold member
      September 25
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      hehehe now that mad comment is at the top ah well, if people want to call it then fine, but for those that say it is crap, there are many to say otherwise. and at the end of the day, it is my poem, and i like it. so boo hoo to those that do not

  • individuality gold member
    September 25
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    i have sat here for days laughing at the response to this poem. some love it, and some hate it. all is as it should be in the world


  • Vendelay
    September 25

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    It seems like you've watched too many porn movies Mr.
    This piece is not a masterpiece of it's own, it's plagiarised porn with nice words on top of the mountain. If your intention was to turn me on you have indeed failed, on the other hand the poem was to me quite funny. It made an impression alright.

    Good luck in the contest.

    //Vendelay

    • individuality gold member
      September 25
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      surely by the title of the poem you knew it was going to be adult! and yet, you clicked in anyway and then left a comment of fake concern and disgust. come on! you loved it


    • individuality gold member
      September 25
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      This piece is not a masterpiece of it's own - of it is own! mind your punk please.


    • individuality gold member
      September 25
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      he pulls language out and waits to... pluck a chicken, it's hungry work you know.

  • peabody
    September 25
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    to hot 4 me.......#3

    you have created images unrelated to the
    darkness i once intered, but it was'nt a
    sweet surrender.

    very erotic.......

  • proudmama04052009
    September 25
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    Very improper and provocative but I liked it. Nicely written.

  • Baldwin
    September 25
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    Provocative

    as proven by the comments.


  • individuality gold member
    September 24
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  • individuality gold member
    September 24
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  • lavender-dreams
    September 23
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    I really loved this. Very sensual and erotic. Very good write.


  • Sudo Nimh silver member
    September 23

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    unexpected and delicious imagery..well writ, poet..and well inspired.


  • Qjones22
    September 23

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    Great!!!!!! :D

    I loved the imagery that you used. It was unlike anything that Ive ever read before. It was wonderful. Keep up the good work!!!

  • KikuFire
    September 23

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    I loved it, it was gorgeous


  • findingurself.less
    September 23
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    Don't know if I love it or hate it, but either way, it left an impression! Lmao!

  • andy-line
    September 23
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    Humorous yet articulate. Well done.


  • individuality gold member
    September 22
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  • dukeshorts
    September 22
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    wtfffffffffffff lol


  • Shadow Anonymised gold member
    September 22
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    ...


  • individuality gold member
    September 22
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  • missgreenkristine
    September 21
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    Yes?

    I don't know what a "verdict" is exactly but hats off to you Sir! Very beautiful...and scary.

  • michael fortuna
    September 21

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    Unique!

    This is a fantastic piece, I do see the humour in it not like certain people who have commented. This is a well writen piece and unique. We don't need the same boring poetry, over and over again. I love poetry and love how each poet and each piece can be different. Poetry is creativity, and this is very creative and needs to be recognised as that.


  • individuality gold member
    September 21
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    i love my poem, in fact i love it so much i am going to hug it.


  • Afe-la
    September 21

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    I'm not sure if i'm more disappointed in the complete lack of taste and intelligence in this piece or the complete lack of taste and intelligence in some that have commented here. Is this really what our world has been reduced to? Didn't anyone tell your parents that first cousin marriages are illegal? Yes i'm talking to all who thought this... pathetic, slime ridden piece of rubbish was worthwhile. I know you're just a comment boy. Obviously you get off over the attention as much as you do over yourself. Sad. Do you do many suicide pieces?

    • The kiss is Thirst gold member
      September 25
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      You speak of Taste and intelligence!! This comes from someone who does not know the meaning of paragraphs! Yes - I have visited your page!

      I think there I found the reason for your comment. You really are an arse You wouldn't really expect an 'arse' to leave a valid comment, would you?

      People have a right to an oppinion. People do not have a right to disrespect the many people here who have given the oppinion that is theirs! You have been extremely rude to a lot of people who have commented as well as the Author here, it is you that is pathetic!

      I will not reduce myself to your level!


    • Vendelay
      September 25
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      Don't know what to say more than.. word!!


      • individuality gold member
        September 25
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        one more thing, you forgot to mention how pornographic my artwork was too


      • individuality gold member
        September 25
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        believe it or not, this poem was not written to turn you on! word baby, keep up the good comments.

    • Qjones22
      September 23
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      Calm Down!!!!! :O

      Afe-la I think that your comment was out of line. I think that everyone is entitled to write what they please. I think that it was unlike anything else. You need to seriously learn to respect other peoples way of defining themselves, because everyone doesnt think the way that you do

    • individuality gold member
      September 21
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      Why thank you very much, I am ever so glad that you approve of my humble poetry, I am so pleased, nay ecstatic, that you adored my poem here and that you left me such a positive comment. I have many more poems in my lists that I am sure you would thoroughly enjoy.

      Please, by all means, feel free to express your adoration in the future. I am always inspired by other people giving to me some genuine critiques - perhaps you could read every single poem I have posted and leave other such comments? I would be extremely grateful if you would. I know it might take some time as I have many poems posted, but please try to make the effort, I know you will be pleased that you did and will thank me for the experience.

      I feel like dancing and singing now, all because I received such a beautiful comment. Perhaps I shall dance and sing, throughout the day, maybe even for the rest of the week. Yes, I have decided to do exactly that, my heart has soared, I feel extremely happy that someone, other than myself, enjoys my poetry.


  • Davy Serpents
    September 21
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    Fucking brilliant

    please continue.

  • crying-4-tears
    September 19
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    this sucks

    way too trashy.


  • nichtmich silver member
    September 21

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    Ultimate erotica, steaming imagery and just enough plain words to make it real as opposed to euphenisms. I like your use of alliteration and internal rhyme to sweep the reader forward. Well done!


  • Lostsoulofsorts
    September 20
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    i di


  • helpmeiaminhell
    September 20
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    im so turned on by this


  • Morbid DreaMz
    September 20

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    I think this is beautifully written.
    Creative, sensual...
    Definitely unique.
    And I adore it.

    And these morons, commenting, "it's trashy" and daft things of the sort...
    It's erotica, in a very intelligent, yet dirty, descriptive way.


    They are the ones who clicked on a poem whose title consists of "Pussy" with "Adult" and "Erotica" tags...
    It's life, using words we can all relate to.
    Afterall...
    Not a one of them could deny that they love a good boning. ;D

    Job more than well done.


  • Stirrer of Stardust
    September 20
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    Ummm.....I clicked on this by accident sorry

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