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Holding On

There are simple moments
No anger, no blame
Just simple
Companionship

A shared laugh
A moment of concern
No broken smiles
No tears

A few lost moments
Where holding hands
Isn't so hard
For awhile

Even if it's just
For tonight
For just one
Night

It's worth it
To have peace
To breathe
Easy

I've missed us
But the pieces
Are still broken
Help me pick them up?

Author notes

not the best and doesnt even begin to capture it but maybe i will later...

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  • steal-my-scene
    May 26, 2008

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    I like this piece. especially the last stanza... it just... brings the entire thing to a very well rounded end. thanks for sharing <3

  • tragicallyGifted
    April 2, 2008

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    "Even if it's just
    For tonight
    For just one
    Night"


    Good nonetheless.


    And I've got the dustpan; just bring a broom.