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I have an urge to paint you WHITE

and ANGER you - anarchic RED and BLACK

and KICK you till you CRACK

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Thanks for the dedication.

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  • cricketjeff gold member
    April 8, 2008

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    This is cheating!!!
    Not only was the contest dedicated to you, you wrote the best entry!!!
    How can the rest of us compete if you insist on writing good stuff!
    Wonderful stuff!


    • Mairi bheag gold member
      April 8, 2008

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      The solution is simple - get Lane to host a contest where only you and I can enter, and the rules stipulate that I have to enter my worst poem and you have to enter your best.


  • Ithica silver member
    April 7, 2008
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    Perfect! Congrats on the Gold!!! You earned it!!!


  • Dalaney gold member
    April 7, 2008
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    powerful punch...exactly what is needed for this contest.
    Love, lane


  • Wayne Leon Learmond
    April 6, 2008

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    Angry piece this is. Love the emotion in this. It is very powerful. Well done.

    Wayne Leon


  • Funluvingrl16
    April 3, 2008
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    Are potatoes from the ground?


  • Amera gold member
    April 3, 2008

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    Oh my! I certainly don't want to get on your bas side! You can really "kick some ass" just simply using words.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Funluvingrl16
    April 2, 2008
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    Are you angry?????

  • Cinnarry gold member
    April 2, 2008
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    white anger
    red black
    kick crack

    very clever


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    April 1, 2008

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    damnit sexy I dont want to be no i mean NO where around. This was awesome. s best wishes in this contest.

    love
    uniqueness.....

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