I have an urge to paint you WHITE
and ANGER you - anarchic RED and BLACK
and KICK you till you CRACK
and ANGER you - anarchic RED and BLACK
and KICK you till you CRACK
Author notes
Thanks for the dedication.
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A contest entry
- Kicking The Wall by Dalaney.
1000 points, ended April 7, 2008, 18 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is cheating!!!
Not only was the contest dedicated to you, you wrote the best entry!!!
How can the rest of us compete if you insist on writing good stuff!
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The solution is simple - get Lane to host a contest where only you and I can enter, and the rules stipulate that I have to enter my worst poem and you have to enter your best.
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Unpronounceable says:
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Perfect! Congrats on the Gold!!! You earned it!!!


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Thank you.
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powerful punch...exactly what is needed for this contest.
Love, lane

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I needed to have something to kick when I wrote it.
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Angry piece this is. Love the emotion in this. It is very powerful. Well done.
Wayne Leon



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Are potatoes from the ground?
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Oh my! I certainly don't want to get on your bas side! You can really "kick some ass" just simply using words.
Love,
Amera♥

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Are you angry?????
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Does the Pope eat Bratwurst?
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Are potatoes from the ground??
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I get mine from Tesco, actually.
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white anger
red black
kick crack
very clever

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Thank you
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damnit sexy I dont want to be no i mean NO where around. This was awesome.
s best wishes in this contest.
love
uniqueness.....

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Thank you, Tory.
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