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Grave Descent

Buoy's bob on the frothy moonlit surf
We all await the birth of morning
The slimy boards of the wharf bend and wallow under heavy rubber boots
Labor is all these calloused hands have ever done
From daybreak till the dwindling of daylight we chance it all
The highest stakes are gambled throughout the perilous workday
For Poseidon has no mercy on the heavy hearts of the greiving
A vessels return is never guaranteed
Nor the lives of those left floating at sea
But each day our warn down bodies are drawn to the shore
By the whispering mist
And we dangle over the jaws of uncertainty
As dawn spills its infinite light into the shallows of the water
We weave our way through the harbor, past the jetty
To a place where fate is the only thing we trust
And after a day on the salty horizon
The ocean's swells carry us home
To feast upon the daily catch
We'll eat like kings and recognize the jaws of uncertainty
We call upon them and beseech mercy

Praying not to be dragged down to the place where our comrades now rest
We accept that the high seas show no compassion
For those who profit from it's bounty

Author notes

nikkia option #6

I was inspired by the ocean. I live in Maine and my dad is a lobsterman so it's what I was brought up knowing all about. The risk of being on the ocean has always been something that intrigued me so I wrote about the way I have always viewed the sea.

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  • Rhythm Child
    November 18, 2008

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    A great entry
    thanks for taking part, wishing you luck would be an insult to your talent so take care

    message me for anything
    Billy (Rhythm Child)


  • whits end silver member
    May 19, 2008

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    This is great. A very good description from your first hand experience of this. I know nothing of this sort of thing growing up in middle America. Quite enjoyable!


  • Nikki Rowles
    April 8, 2008

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    Great write...I have to watch that or I'm going to label prose as poetry....when in cases like this it can be soooo much better....Thank you for your entry...
    ~*~An Unwritten Truth~*~


  • forty
    April 4, 2008
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    Ah, to be by the sea on a warm summer day

    Well, you know I OBVIOUSLY loved it!!! This reminds me of summer days and nights, the calm ones mostly, but also the crazier ones. You know I love you gurrlll, besties 4lyfe!!! YOur writing has really been growing recently; perhaps all this time spent on AP is starting to pay off lol

    <3 Christina

    P.S. Fackin' amazing


  • GirlAnachronism
    April 3, 2008
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    also check the spelling of "calloused" and "guaranteed" (i'm pretty sure that's how it's spelled)

  • GirlAnachronism
    April 3, 2008

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    great write. check over your punctuation, apostrophes in particular, and the spelling of Poseidon. otherwise this is an amazing piece. fits the contest perfectly. thanks for entering!


  • Bull3t2b1n0ry
    April 1, 2008
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    n


  • Bull3t2b1n0ry
    April 1, 2008

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    you are ridiculous this is freakin amazing best poem ever written hands down you are going to freakin wi

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