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This Motley Heart

Sentiments echoing
within muffled
colours of love
upon this motley
heart.....
Shades of heliotrope
and ochre blending
into pains perfection.....

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Stained Heart

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  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    April 2

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    Go Gettum J----Love the words "Motley & Heliotrope"
    --best of luck to you in the contest!!


  • LadyDementia gold member
    April 2

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    This is so well worded, beautifully done. Good luck in the contest


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    April 2

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    WOW hun
    Awesome poem and some amazing words.
    You have pulled this off beautifully
    Hugs Julie

  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    April 2

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    Wow yes! I really felt that... love the expression 'motley heart' and that last sentence really hits home... so much emotion and depth in this!
    thank you for the entry!