Beautiful star
shining from afar
Her true beauty,
shines from within.
Never letting anyone,
stand in her way of living.
Fighting till the very end,
holding her head up high.
Moving past all evil.
Pushing her way through.
Never in the dark
For then her beauty wouldn't shine
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Miss Perry I Love You
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naturally good
True to the word, and simple but uniquely right. Had to read this twice.
Oneal
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i like this for its simplicity - you obviously care a lot about the subject, good use of verbs- fighting and pushing- to suggest the character here as well as the metaphor of the star - miss perry is obviously very very special to you
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wow!
This is very simple... yet gorgeous! very sweet dedication! Totally expresses true beauty perfectly!
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awww this is a gorgous write full of love care and meaning. it made me smile to see a friendship so close as this
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And then you posted it on here, HEHE!
What would I do without my twin!!! I love you too Miss Angel with all my heart 'n all my soul!
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If you only knew how often I come back to this and other pieces you have written for me, sometimes they are my only source of happiness and for that I have to say THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart!
PLE
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