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War Eagles

I want to break your nose…
I want to shatter it…
I want to beat your skull…
Throw you in a pit…
I’m gonna rub your face…
In all your war bullshit…
I’m gonna call you out…
Cuz you’re a stupid bitch…

Let’s see how much you like war…
When it’s right here at your door…
Let’s see what you say to me…
When I make you an amputee…
You don’t know what I can do…
You don’t know what I will say…
You think you can stop me now…
But I’ll do it any way…

I’m gonna strip you down…
Take away your false pride…
You’ll bleed until you drown…
Hope you enjoy the ride…
You think that you’re real tough…
You’re a war eagle…
The things that I will do to you…
They’re fucking illegal…

Let’s see how much you like war…
When it’s right here at your door…
Let’s see what you say to me…
When I make you an amputee…
You don’t know what I can do…
You don’t know what I will say…
You think you can stop me now…
But I’ll do it any way…
 
You think that you’re real tough…
In all your war bullshit…
You’re just a war eagle…
You’re a stupid bitch …
You think your real tough…
You think that you are cool…
But it’s all just a bluff…
You’re just a fucking tool…

Let’s see how much you like war…
When it’s right here at your door…
Let’s see what you say to me…
When I make you an amputee…
You don’t know what I can do…
You don’t know what I will say…
You think you can stop me now…
But I’ll do it any way…

Author notes

this is a song that i wrote for my newest band (we insofar have yet to name ourselves)...

the song is about the obsession people seem to have with war and how they seem to love violence until it happens to them...

By: Crazyhead

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Comments


  • Play Pretend.
    June 7, 2008

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    Eh...
    Not amazing, but not bad.
    It's hard because it's really meant to be sung...
    but good job and thanks for entering my contest.


  • Play Pretend.
    April 2, 2008
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    Please put your SN in the Authors Box.
    Thank You.