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In Finite Terms

Wide world, or vision narrow held

as crutch confronting harsh fate knelled,

too often interface is held

to preconceptions neatly spelled.

Perception cannot be compelled 

to toe the line, fine print upheld,

must seek holistic outlines, meld

both seen,unseen, from naught withheld.

 

 

Yet few dare challenge paradox,

can't view life from outside cant box,

thus many fear, when door unlocks, 

free choice, will shiver in their socks,

when faced with options seen as blocks,

complain about their starting-blocks,

call into question how life's clocks

seem overtime to run hard knocks.

 

Without self-knowledge who can judge

events, relationships, and budge

responding not reacting, sludge

discard, draw trumps, yet not begrudge

chance dance elsewhere, who need a nudge

to measure, pleasure, not prejudge 

each unexpected, sundry smudge.

   

Self-confidence prerequisite

remains permitting cap to fit

while blinker free and insight lit

must motives meld both sense and wit.   

Care not for sects too tightly knit,

which come with some predestined kit

to offer strictures roast on spit

which turns around redemption's writ.

 

When life’s soft tick flicks swifly by  
when fête holds sway old Time must fly
“and not a cloud obscures the sky”
why worry, pleasure now deny ?
For joys tomorrow soul soars high.
True, some are smitten, springs run dry,
yet few heed inner warning cry. -
to mist dismiss, wave Time goodbye.

Fate may be written, it may lie -
behind the veil is passing sigh,
more is assumed in store so why
seek answers which no gold can buy.
For, if there’s more, hope cannot die,
if nothing, then why worry, high
and low in turn their fate defy,
then wave forgot sink twixt sea, sky.

Life’s transience, quite underrated,
too rarely seems appreciated
as if the spirits, once elated,
could keep their thrust unmitigated.
What lies beyond the tombstone dated
has never been elucidated, -
though many have prevaricated
redemption offer unabated.

Yet dances led, with lead unweighted,
quickstep through life, Death unawaited.
Why worry if the dice are weighted
with finite term anticipated  ?
Perception closely seems related

to actions oft anticipated

by intuition which, unsated,

seeks 'more' before true core is stated. 


When Time speeds up and hell-for-leather
is pressured onwards, storm tossed feather.
how drear each day to wonder whether
tomorrow’s game we’ll play together !
Ignored too often altogether
are ice-burst pipes in balmy weather,
or sacrificial goat on tether,
when life’s free run on hill, vale, heather.

Dim is victim’s prescience
despite disaster’s imminence,
secure perception complements
self-satisfaction’s arguments.
Men draw their sense of permanence
from self-supporting evidence
behind life’s surface comforts whence
much is drawn, save diffidence.

Life’s patterns in advance may churn
a warning aura we discern
through experience, concern, -
here cause, effect, respect must earn
before anxieties return
to haunt, to taunt, or bridges burn.
Life’s patterns in advance who turn
to true advantage - all peace yearn.
Unwise who’ll sapless, saphead, spurn
the hints that candles one can’t burn
at both ends long. Yet each must learn
alone wheels turn. Urn soon we earn.

How much of man’s self-confidence
is self-sustaining self-defence -
a mechanism fear prevents
although at prudence's expense.

The coin cards of coincidence –
that noise to others represents, -
turn to advantage, making sense
of elements which signs dispense
which seed the sentiment events
may be controlled as ‘whither’ ‘whence’
seem linked by dream intelligence
that lasts although we’re hurried hence.

When cloud free shines the morning star
dawn’s rose grows gold, presumes too far,
as if no shadow near or far
could compromise success, could jar,
could ever dowse life’s vital fire,
as if, once launched, the poet’s lyre
could chant forever and inspire,
nor bore nor jaw resentful ire.

Man’s pride still heeds the siren call
til morn when free flight turns free fall.
that day one lesson learns, - that small
sweet seems to gleam when night threats all.

Perceptive insight should withal

ignore snobs, mob's pedestrian brawl,

innately find the wherewithal

to scribble, scrawl transcend, soothe squall.


Then narrow the circumference
of independence seems, intense
the pressure, the predicaments,
when arguments can't influence,
invalidate or overturn,
decisions others would confirm,
when former freedoms won't return
to light horizons dim and tern.

Those who rely on providence
too soon may find at their expense
that everlasting affluence
rhymes rarely with experience.
There is no ‘Ave’ no ‘Marie’,
no Eden for eternity.
Perjured he who’d guarantee
an endless hour in houri spree.

There is no golden throne and grand
when falls life’s last coarse grain of sand
(the spectre of reign’s written hand
of course reins in things out of hand) .
There’s no white rabbit, magic hat,
no second innings where the bat
defies Time’s ball. When that is that !
dreams of karmic streams fall flat.

When Fate’s hand, tricked and trumped, turns black
dark Present weighs, no turning back
to glories past. When cares attack
fair opportunities all lack.
Reflect ! Each given day completed
is stay of execution greeted
before fell final judgement meted
when hope for fair appeal’s defeated.
Reflect ! What future radiance shines
For anyone beyond life’s lines ?
Enjoy today ! The Present signs
itself, as Cause Effect aligns.

 

Perception balance interjects

between life's toil and trouble wrecks,

and wishful thinking, thus respects

both fear and fancy, trust elects,

reality and dreams connects,

defensive phalanx e'er rejects,

creating vision true, inspects

both fact and fiction circumspect.

 

How the above our verse affects

to stay on course, spurn side-effects

distracting which the truth neglects

stems from internal balance, checks,

soul-song which laziness deflects

to order thought that naught infects.

Creative wells leave most perplex,

write which 'mots justes' with ease selects.

 

One could expound till time and tide

see mankind taken for a ride,

let this short essay thus abide

as introduction to provide

an insight into vision tied

to sentiments that coincide

with heart's intelligence allied

unto vocabulary wide ...

 

 

 

... to be continued ad infinitum ...Smile

 

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  • KleioKalamity
    April 29

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    WOW GRRREATT

    woow this is very very good i love it. there is so much feeling in this piece and that shows that you are a verry good poet.

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  • azure85 gold member
    April 6

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    Yes, the stanzas each contain a gem of wisdom of their own. Combined, they spell out many views of perceptions and could spiral into more. An excelent use of the prompt, thank you so much.

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  • TizMoi
    April 2

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    Excellent

    Another amazing piece by yourself here my friend. I love how you write amazingly and leave one looking at their inner self. Thanks so much for sharing.

  • Infinite Wisdom ...

    there's naught finer than a thinking poet that is able to divide and multiply the ever perceptive mind and then organize those findings in rhyme. Your poem is full of fact and a pleasure that stimulated my perception. Thanks for sharing it. joy


  • Night Hope gold member
    April 1

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    "True, some are smitten, springs run dry,
    yet few heed inner warning cry. -
    to mist dismiss, wave Time goodbye."

    I dunno how you do it, Scribe...how you make such unattractive truths sounds so very beautiful. You astound me, my Friend...Constantly, consistently, without fail. Thank you for always giving me food for thought...& for making sure I clean my plate. Wanda

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