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Night - Part III

It's night and you're by my side,
I can't help but wonder what you're thinking.
What does the world look like through your eyes,
is it beautiful, bland, growing, or shrinking?

You smile, your contagious smile,
and I can't help but to grin.
You make me melt, like the sun melts snow,
it's like you brighten me up from within.

Every time I look up into the night sky,
I'll think of you and me.
Your smiling face, my hair in the wind,
and your mesmerizing eyes, perpetual like the sea.

Author notes

This is a continuation of Night, I, and II. So please read the first ones , I think it'll make more sense to you that way. BTW, this is probably the last one.

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