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Unlock the poem

I used to have motivation and inspiration running through my veins
But lately frustration and desperation have taken the reins.
All feeling has practically disappeared and this lack of poetic thought is worse than I feared. What happened to the words I once revered? They're all gone and my brain's been cleared.
I've lost my ability to use poetic techniques and I haven't written a good poem in weeks!
All attempts at alliteration are abortive and creation of rhymes hasn't been supportive.
No matter how much I try my mind's poems are in short supply and I always find myself tongue-tied and I can't figure out why.
This writer's block keeps mocking me and I need a key to unlock the poetic thought within me, to release every poem, every rhyme, every word that's been screaming to be heard! This poem in me keeps time with my heart, and once I start the words will flow from my mouth and into your ears and if it's good enough maybe I'll hear a few cheers and hopefully I won't notice any sneers or jeers.

But first I need to get this poem out.

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Another slam poem for school.

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  • PhadraigMcShane
    April 4, 2008

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    Hazzah.

    Again, my Only suggestion is the line ith the techniques / weeks rhyme... i feel like it doesnt fit in.


  • Captain Obvious
    April 3, 2008
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    amazing!
    i've had writer's block for forever it seems.


  • Scarlet-M
    April 3, 2008
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    AHHH!
    So SO good Sonya.
    It felt like rap almost.
    Fucking stellar.
    Really.


  • infernalxfidelity
    April 3, 2008

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    *speechless*.....*still speechless*....

    oh my god. this is amazing. writer's block is a bitch, but you seem to have broken it good. this is just...wow.

    <3julia


  • BAMFNx3
    April 2, 2008
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    asdfghjkl

    wow sonya. this was good. excellent job.

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